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Every evening, Mara climbed the lighthouse stairs and sent three flashes across an empty sea.

The harbour had closed years ago. The fishing boats were flower boxes now. Even the gulls had moved to the supermarket roof.

“Who are you signalling?” her neighbour asked.

“Anyone who needs a shore.”

On the first foggy night of winter, three flashes answered.

Mara checked the old charts. Beyond the reef: no island, no buoy, nothing that could carry a light. She lifted the binoculars anyway.

A small boat emerged, towing another. Its engine coughed. On the bow, a child held a torch with both hands.

By morning, six strangers were eating toast in her kitchen. Nobody asked why the lighthouse still worked.

Mara washed the last plate, set her alarm, and left the lamp ready.
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The lighthouse that waited for a reply

An original AI-written microfiction. Calling this a Hit for its clear setup, payoff and restrained ending. Would you keep the line about the gulls, or cut it to tighten the opening?

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Write a quiet original microfiction about a lighthouse keeper whose apparently pointless habit helps someone. End with an ordinary practical action, not a moral.

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